Wednesday, July 26, 2017

the joys of innocence

                                                                                             Attribution: pexel photos
Image: The First Kiss  (here)

Sunday's Whiligig 12 given words:
joys best surprise someone sweet laugh
girls  hair think alike deceit only

the joys of innocence
best times of our life
it was no surprise
with someone so sweet
we did laugh together

the girls with shiny hair
the boys unkempt a little
we would think alike
that was all that mattered

no deceit no sulking
only the heart thumping
awkward in the beginning
slivers all over but we did it
yay!
we sealed our first kiss

MMT's Sunday Whirligig Wordle #122
MLMM's Tale Weaver #129  -  kiss
Paul's at Real Toad's Scribble it -  the first time

14 comments:

  1. deftly described...the slivers gave me the same. Thanks for linking up Hank.

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  2. I remember the slivers of those first days.........I am happy you made it through!

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  3. Ah yes.. the memory of first kiss .. is something we never forget!

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  4. That first kiss - excellent poem. It truly is something we never ever forget.

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  5. beautiful Hank, loved your contribution to the Tale Weaver this week.

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  6. That first kiss can sure linger in the memory for a lifetime

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  7. Ah... the excitement! the excitement of a first kiss.

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  8. First kiss is memorable, nice write

    Much love...

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  9. Beautifully described...ah the awkwardness, bumping noses...never will I forget that first kiss :) Cheryl-Lynn

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  10. Wonderful writing. But regarding the haibun, I have to ask if this was true and if it happened to you? The poem at the end condenses the prose portion perfectly.

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